Friday, September 5, 2008

nirvana................

Leering at the black swarthy dome,
The fidgety mind abandoned the hoary home.
Leaving back worries, sloughing no tear,
Undoing the bonds, leaving all peer.
Towards the witchery been cast,
Eclipsing the satanic past.
The toxicity of the smell,
Following up to the alley to hell.
Hollow and eerie, splotches of sin,
Vying all alone, no sign of kin.
Icy cold breath, oodles of lust,
Love was it at all, or desire just?
The stain of vice darkest red,
Slew the soul, did it? Left it dead?
No no they cry, it just let go.
Reincarnation they said it was, was it so?
It’ll live to plague and lick to the last,
Nothing remains, no whit, no dust.
The hell’s porch won’t be left to knock,
Only the narcissism will screech and mock.

10 comments:

Unknown said...

awesome !

Deepee said...

El!

the boy said...

nice.

Amitava Mukherjee said...

C'est excellente !!!

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

Incredibly brilliant. I can feel the emotions here. If this is your first try at English poetry, you are sure to go miles.Keep up this phenomenal writing Tina.Kudos to you.

Nabanita said...

fantastic!

Sonai said...

really awesome..........

Intriguiging Answers said...

A great start as a blogger....good use of words for describing and creating an image in the mind of readers..also can be broken in different parts

Unknown said...

wow!! I never knew bout this talent of urs... :-O Keep it up!! :-)

Utkooh said...

Truly

Nothing remains, no whit, no dust..

You put it quite aptly...

Quality post....A refreshing read indeed.