Sunday, September 28, 2008

confession..

Don't forgive me ever..
I'm at fault..
I'm a sinner..
I made way through to the heart and i mutilated the soul..
I made pieces,ripped it apart..
Don't forgive me..i'm at fault.
With an angel's visage i erred the Lord..
Managed a serpentine cached veil
I had the cruel face behind the mask..
Give me hell..o good Lord
Don't forgive me ever...i'm at fault.

2 comments:

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

A piece of unnecessary advise maybe,but still.Seriously, the SUN, get some of it[:)]..And stop blaming yourself for everything that happened/happens.Trust me, it never helps the cause and deflates you more so.[:)].

About the poem:-You can do better.The first one in this blog is still THE BEST for me.Keep it up and remember it's better to shine forever than to burn out and fade away[;)][:)]..[>:D<]

Amitava Mukherjee said...

I wonder if the mind thinks in poetry, somehow it expresses much more than boring prose.....